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whispers

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the windhorse whispers
prayers and blessings circulate
curling round my feet

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  • Sitting here with a grey sky outside my window, reading your haiku . . . ah . . .

    Marc


    • Draig aine gold member
      May 18
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      Namaste my friend

      this is one of my first tries, reading your bio, I am not that far away, sort of a Thomas Merton,Pagan Buddhist with lapsed catholic tracks and a fondness for high Anglican Masses full of music, a spiritual sojourner of sorts I guess .

      Funny just got a pm from a friend in Australia, seems it is grey all over the world today


  • Dark Otter
    November 22, 2008
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    Nice haiku!

    Its got a little gold thingey with it. Someone else must have liked it also. Good insight!

  • carole21
    November 22, 2008
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    nicely done . . congrats on the gold !!

  • saddie23
    November 21, 2008

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    This is cool

    Congrats on the gold. What a wonderful haiku you have here. My fav. "windhorse whispers", beautiful words of wisdom. Saddie23


  • azure85 gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    the windhorse whispers
    prayers and blessings circulate
    curling round my feet

    A very beautiful haiku, that wraps the reader up into the beauty of the prayers and the sights. Thank you so much.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    nice

    A very good piece of writing my friend, wish you luck in the contest!


  • hawkeslake gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    Wonderfully concise, perfect for the picture!

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