Rest yourself upon my heart
whisper sweet nothings
to the very parts of me
only you can reach
leave soft, subtle kisses
as reminders
in places no one can see
but me
but leave no fingerprints
or scent
upon my subtleties
leave no evidence for him
to find you here upon me
no confirmation of secret dalliances
and forbidden love
Author notes
60 words on the prompt
10. Hide Your Fingerprints
A contest entry
- PROMPTS IX - Round 2 of 2 - by Bear - by Arkbear.
500 points, ended November 19, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congrats on the well-deserved Gold!
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Oh my.....this is headed to Finals....you are up against some good writes....I hope this makes it up there somewhere....this is outstanding
Standing ovation here in Arkansas
Good luck & God bless,
Bear ~
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I wasn't expecting the forbidden affair but I love it!
Beautiful, sensual, sad and deep this is a wonderful read hun
Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
Love to You
~Manda
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Ohhh.. like where you took this! A sensuality and deviousness here! Well done sis.
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Gorgeous poem, great take on the prompt!
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Great take on the prompt.
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Lovely! Great job on that prompt!
best wishes in the contest.
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WOW! I am in awe. Seriously. This was just soo..Incredible. In just 60 words. See? What'd I tell you? You have such a gift! I could never do that! And your take on the prompt was just beyond amazing and interesting. I loved it. Especially the second stanza. What is this? Huh? Huh? Yes! It is GOLD! Best to you in the contest!
Much love
Ylova
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Oh wow this is amazing! You certainly took this prompt to a deep, dark ,level.
Love it! All the best in the contest
Gaylene
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Wow this was a great 60 words very nice piece indeed
I am glad that you got into the contest best wishes always be well
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