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If you ever stepped into my life

If you ever stepped into my life,
You would want to run away,
Like I wish I could.
You would be sad and lonely
And no one would care
At all.

If you ever stepped into my life,
You’d give up,
Like I do.
You would throw away your wishes
And dreams.

If you ever stepped into my life,
You would cry as if
There were no tomorrow.
And just sit in the dark
Waiting

If you ever stepped into my life,
You would laugh at my
Pity.
But then you would realize
What pain really feels like.

If you ever stepped into my life,
You’d never look at the mirror.
You would just cry and be
Disgusted.
And plan what you would do.

If you ever stepped into my life
The sun would never shine,
It’d be dark… always.
There wouldn’t be happiness… only
Sadness…

But then I realize..
You would never be me.
You’d never understand.
You would never listen…
Just let me cry…. And sleep until the day’s
End.

Author notes

Another poem I had at SP, but now it's in archieved.. please give in revisions.. anything to make it sorta better.. I guess.

Hope.

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Comments

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  • Take Me Away 2010
    November 20, 2008
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    Thats really deep but i liked it.

  • Livin.4.God
    November 17, 2008
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    Thanks for the read and comment, Amulet of Aphrodite, StickyNote5, and Girl of Dreams!


  • iluvZackyVengeance
    November 16, 2008
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    wow that was deep alls i have to say is that


  • StickyNote5
    November 16, 2008

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    i really enjoyed reading this. Sometimes i will skip the middle of a poem and just comment on the first part, but i ready this all the way. Great job!!


  • Girl of dreams
    November 15, 2008
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    nice poem. it brings out the emotions good piece

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