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Silence

Silence... in a way feels suffocating.
Though I don't know why.
Not a sound... nothing.
Just sitting there...
Maybe your thinking
But who really knows?
And you just sit there, staring
At nothing.
Is that the point?
Everyone quite...
Too quiet for anything... anyone.
So quite you could her a pen drop and
Ding!
The only sound which
Circulates the room.

Your throat closing up.
Your mouth is dry.
Because your in a room of
Silence.

Author notes

Very... different?? Honestly, it might not be too good. It's a freewrite at SP (sharepoetry)

Anyways what to edit, revise? Whatever you wanna call it??

Thanks for the advice (if you comment)
Hope.

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  • StickyNote5
    November 16, 2008

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    no one ever actually explains scilence, they just say how miserable it is. very diffrent. in the first stanza, its 'quiet' not 'quite' they are diffrent!!