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Carnivorous Revenge

Tybalt's Quarrel
Seeming To Stem Aggressively
As Prowling Towards Rebellion
... And He purrs as he cuddles his sword.
He smells Emotion, Carnivorously Lusting
Joy For The Hunt Of Almost Innocence
The Gorgeous revenger, A Dish Of Avengers
His Narcissistic Pride
To Deny Lord Capulet,
Wishful tears of the old

For A Blade Is dripping

And A Stench Reeks From The Grave

Soon to Be Joined By Star-Crossed Lovers

Dear Tybalt, His Pride Must Puff Up

A Lesson Learned To The Prince Of Cats

 

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Written For Contest. A Poem About Tybalt's Quarrel And Lord Capulets Plea From Romeo And Juliet

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  • Lauren Noir
    December 6, 2008

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    Lovely. I love how you know the text, and you really understand.

    This was vivd and still remained beautiful. I like that.

    Good luck, well done and thanks for entering


  • Yorkshire Rose
    November 24, 2008

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    briliantly done,and romeo and juliet is really unique place to be inspired like it alot


  • XxYoru-OkamixX
    November 16, 2008

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    wow... i absloutely loved the targedy of romeo and juliet.a nd this is a grand poem, so i absolutely love it. kudos to you. ^^