Far you are
yet I feel your breath
as winds of warmth
Surround me
Bright the light
but I nuzzle
into night's safety
Surround me
Mute the lute
and I hear your voice
when hope seems lost
Surround me
Far you are
yet I know you're here
for you hold my hand
Command me
bright the light
to which I go
Command me
Mute the lute
and I sing your praise
that all all may hear
Command me
Far You are
Yet I am touched
by you
A contest entry
- a spotlight ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 29, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yes HE is far reaching and omnipresent ..you have shown HIS strength and the grace of HIS love around the words of your great poetry..well done..
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This reads like a lilting song prayer of praise. Sit to music it deserves to be.
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Anne
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Thanks for the shout for my poor offering
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