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You Killed Me.. Do You Even Care?



To ly here with out you in my arms,
Hurts so much, you'll never understand.
I miss you, every second of every day,
I miss all those sweet words that you'd say.

You were all I would need,
Now you've left me, to die and bleed.
My hearts crying for you!
Its screaming your name!
Its a shame you no longer feel the same.

To walk out the door,
Not even a goodbye!
What did I do to make you leave?
PLEASE TELL ME WHY!

The blood keeps pouring from my chest,
The one pleace you was loved best.
My Heart! no longer intact,
Since you left, it was Cracked.

Lying here in a puddle of blood,
To die alone, so unloved.
This is what you did to me!
To allow me to die slow and painly!

The way you killed my heart,
My most treasured part,
Dedicated to you,
Now its stopped beating,
THANKYOU -

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  • Deadpoetic
    November 18, 2008
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    crap

    i really need some ideas to improve this poem, its shocking