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she squats

she squats
after birth...
to help child's arm wave

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  • azure85 gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    she squats
    after birth...
    to help child's arm wave

    Very interesting topic for a haiku, and one that brings the beginning of life into the reader's vision. Thank you so much.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    Good write