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Flying, (Rondelet )

I am flying
Soaring, swooping high in the air
I am flying
Buoyed by wind , there's no denying
Going here, there and  everywhere
Gorgeous feeling, nary a care
I am flying.

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  • PerfectImperfection
    December 10, 2008
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    A lovely little piece of hopeful height. Thoughtful expression to form. Thank you for your entry!


  • KayJay
    November 18, 2008

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    Words with wings... you've captured the essence of the image in flowing, soaring words... Well done and best of luck.
    Ken


  • Elfin
    November 17, 2008

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    Well done billbard, this poem really makes you feel like you've taken flight. May I wish you all the best in the contest. Val


  • Canadamomma
    November 15, 2008
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    great write, good luck in the contest