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To my Friend

I am writeing this poem today,

to describe something that words cannot portray.

It is to my dearest of friends,

someone of whom i can depend.

She is gorgeous and she is funny,

she is sweeter then a chocolate bunny.

She has her goals and her ambitions,

i know i can count on her without any suspicions.

My friend is a gift this i cannot lie,

she is an angel sent from the heavens on high.

My friend is so special she is one of a kind,

please dont take her for granted, please dont be so blind.

I love my friend with my heart an my soul,

for when i talk to her she makes me feel whole.

Her name is Robin so get it right,

cause for my friend i am willing to fight.

I want her to know she is my sun and my moon,

and with out her in my life i wouldnt make is past noon.

I love my friend and shes knows that i do,

so this poem for her is long past overdue.

Thank you my friend for just being you,

thank you my friend for a love so true!

I love you robin hood... always have and always will

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  • Ken-Maverick
    November 21, 2008

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    Awww, its good to have friends like that isnt it
    and i'm sure this friend of yours feels the exact same way towards you,
    A lovely poem this is indeed

    All the best to you in the contest and thank you so much for entering

    Ken

  • pvenugopal
    November 17, 2008

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    You are bristling aggression right through. You mean business. Thats the spirit. Take her by the waist, swing her round and plant a smacking kiss on her lips. That is always the best recipe. Take grandpa's word.


  • solitarytear
    November 16, 2008

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    i realy

    hope she knows......this is an amazing tribute to someone that has touched your life.....we all should have such a friend in our lives.....*smiles at ken*


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    this definately made me smile