Leather touches to bare skin
as his kisses press her further
into the chill of a lust fogged window
while fumbling teenage fingers
follow hollow desire
coerced by peer pressure
to the back seat of daddy’s car
virginity unable to be reclaimed
Author notes
prompt ~ impulse
50 words and under
A contest entry
- impulse; everyone needs it by written-in-ink.
700 points, ended November 27, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a cool true to life poem well deserving of a silver Excellent
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live it
all too familiar
man trust me
it spoke to me
cuz iv been there
but i think that you did an amazing job with it
trust me i really
really think that you did
thank you
and good luck -
I felt the desire in the first part and then the pure heartache to fit in and lose ones self and virginity in the end
Powerfully penned hun!
Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
Love to You
~Manda
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Happens far too often to my mind. The wonder that it should be when accompanied with love is just lost forever.
A sad and deep hun
All the best with this!
Gaylene
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