snow shelter the earth
straddling the warmth in winter
a morning storks nest
A contest entry
- 48 hours to Haiku by azure85.
900 points, ended November 21, 2008, 36 entries
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snow shelter the earth
straddling the warmth in winter
a morning storks nest
A lovely picture in the mind with your haiku, the images are very nice and you can see them all so clearly. Thank you so much.
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thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. Saddie23
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This is beautiful, but I think 'shelter' should be shelters. Other than that, great write!
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Thank you
Thank you for pointing that out to me. I will change it. Saddie23
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thank yo
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Good write.
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