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I am yours,
You are mine.
We will test the waters for all time.
Sifting through the years,
Over comming our fears.
Drinking in the love,
And the feelings we feel for each other,
Like there is no one else.

In our dance of life,
People will come and go.
Weaving through our lives,
Leaving imprints in our minds and hearts.
Forever shaping our world,
As we learn what our love is in this life.

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  • Ken-Maverick
    November 21, 2008

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    This is very shaweeeet indeed
    I'm a big sucker for love poems
    much enjoyed the read

    All the best to you in the contest and thanks for entering

    Ken


  • solitarytear
    November 16, 2008
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    clappys

    wonderful poem.......


  • Deadpoetic
    November 15, 2008

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    very good

    i love this poem, i love the use of words
    i love the last paragraph of this poem.. also thankyou for the comment on my poem , appreciated <3


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    lovely support of life and tribulation
    thanks