I am yours,
You are mine.
We will test the waters for all time.
Sifting through the years,
Over comming our fears.
Drinking in the love,
And the feelings we feel for each other,
Like there is no one else.
In our dance of life,
People will come and go.
Weaving through our lives,
Leaving imprints in our minds and hearts.
Forever shaping our world,
As we learn what our love is in this life.
A contest entry
- Swift Something Happy by Ken-Maverick.
2400 points, ended November 21, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is very shaweeeet indeed
I'm a big sucker for love poems
much enjoyed the read
All the best to you in the contest and thanks for entering
Ken
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clappys
wonderful poem....... -
very good
i love this poem, i love the use of words
i love the last paragraph of this poem.. also thankyou for the comment on my poem , appreciated <3

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lovely support of life and tribulation
thanks






