oats and wheats
bend an oblong lizard tongue
toward an earthen vane
structured of significance
bold
and amber beauty
unseen by
the naked eye
A contest entry
- Contest. by PerfectImperfection.
800 points, ended December 10, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent~
Wowzers~ You sure have a way with words to get the reader to
drop a jaw and tongue~ and eight ball
Powerful piece my Friend~
Love it!!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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There is such a poignant sense of beauty here - brevity; with a unique delve into the imagery as well. Nicely done. Thank you for your entry!
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thanks
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A creative take on the picture... you've captured the wind's sightless beauty. Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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Cool!! You're always unique!
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Well done Tim and good luck in the contest. Val
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Super cool write, Tim. Deserving
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may I just borrow your muse for awhile...
I do like where it wanders
Juls
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sure, she's a fucking bitch anyways
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great, then we will do just fine together
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Sensually done my friend C
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wonderfully penned; best of luck in the contest
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ooooh interesting!
great write I like your direction, best of luck in myWendykin's contest.
Tasha
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