Cold the wind blows – cold the wind blows
Cold is the breath of the wind to and fro
Mean is the touch of the breeze in the trees
Cold is the wind as it tackles the leaves
Cold the wind blows as it sighs through the night
Cold are the shadows that follow in flight
Mean is its smile as it runs through the grass
Cold is its touch as it grabs at my arse
Cold the wind blows as cranky as sin
Cold is its breath as it closes on in
Cold is its laugh as it blows everywhere
Cold on my skin and it‘s cold in my hair
Cold on my back and so cold on my spine
Cold is the wind as it follows behind
Cold is its breath as it breathes down my back
Cold is the wind as it blows down the track
Cold the wind blows – cold the wind blows
Cold is the breath of the wind to and fro
Cold are its hands as it pushes me on
I am so glad I have underpants on
Cold is the wind of the winter that’s come
Cold is the wind even under the sun
Cold are the night and so cold are the days
I wish that by God it would all blow away
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A very fine write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
A well worked poem that led one onward to the little touches of humour that lightened the coldness of the subject matter Another one to entertain the readers Excellent
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Thank you, Legend. Always appreciated as you know.
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You used the word "cold" at least 20 times!!!
...so why does this poem warm my heart?!?!
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Haaaaaaaaa! That's very funny. I like that. You should have been a comedian...or are you? This piece actually fits with today. It's so cold, it would freeze your tits off! Thanks for the read.
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...if I has any they would have froze off her today!
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In your case....just head south! lol!!!!!!!!!!!!
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So many of us would agree with you, and some of our cold prairie people in Canada would be buying this poem to hang in their homes..It's humor yet it's frank disclosures of COLD are powerful! Love the Cold repeated in the lines...The flow and rhyme are excellent!
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Thank you, mate. I'm glad you liked this. I can't click on the stars here for you at this time as for some reason tonight, it doesn't work. I'll be back tomorrow and see if it works then. Thank you.
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This is cute and very cute and creative. I chuckled when you said "arse" in the second paragraph instead of the other word.
You are giving me a chill as I read this cause every other word is cold. 
Rather enjoyed the poem in itself. it made me chuckle on a quite a few occasions. Great write! Keep up the good work
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As i read this, i found myself getting very cold. toes of ice and nose frigid. you truely did an awesome job on this piece... Amazing!
becca
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Brrrrrr..You have made your case, and I agree with it totally!
I like the repetition in this poem as it makes it even more fun to read. The imagery is amazing, and I could feel the chill as I read. I throughly enjoyed this write. Great job! Blessings, Patty
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well, as I woke up to a few fresh inches of snow this morning, I can definitely relate to this lol...a very entertaining and fun read. Well done.
Rory
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Once again, brilliant write. I laughed aloud at this:
"Mean is its smile as it runs through the grass
Cold is its touch as it grabs at my arse"...Good job
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Well penned !
Great rhyme used here and it flows very smoothly
An enjoyable read 
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Cold the Wind Blows is a reminder that we have such varied climates in our large country. You have a good rhythm and flow all the way through with a consistent meter.
Overall a very good poem.
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