She's not what you imagined.
Her beauty you could never fathom.
So close your eyes, and thank your lucky stars,
she's in love with who you are.
Canary yellow tied around her empire,
you're barely good enough to admire.
A contest entry
- pic prompt by written-in-ink.
400 points, ended November 20, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - CELEBRATING POETRY AND POETS- ONE-DAY competition, "PREVIOUSLY WRITTEN" WORK ONLY by Vera Rich.
6000 points, ended November 26, 2008, 127 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - want me to indulge you? okay, I will. by broken-colours.
1750 points, ended October 13, 149 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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gah this stillgets me i am glad that i gave you gold you deserved it
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oh my gosh, thank you so much
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I find this almost impossible to read (I did ask that texts be made easily legible!) but so far as I can make out, you seem to have misread the rules of my "Celebrating poetry and poets" competition. For this piece does not seem to refer to either. I wish you luck with it elsewhere - but for this particular competition, it has to rank as a "non-starter".
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This is great! Keep writing!
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