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Snow/Falling

Floating gracefully towards its brothers and sisters
Joining them in their fallen beauty
Small wet crystals, brilliantly shimmering
Intercepted, trapped upon a child's tongue

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Could you say a heavy fall of snow is a torrent?
Or would you just tell me that that sounds abhorrent?
You could call it a dump, but that's just not as lovely
Does it matter what state the precipitation's in, roughly?

Author notes

I can't wait for the ski season.

... Do you like snow?

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