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Last night

Why do I miss you so much?
I just saw you last night,
And yet it wasn't enough

Was I imagining little moments?
Your hand reaching out for mine,
A smile dancing across your face

Were you trying to get me alone?
You were staring so intently,
I have a witness to the event

Why did you look at me like that?
You were being so serious,
Holding my hand again before I left

Why can't my mind be distracted?
All I could to was listen to the engine,
And smell your Curve on my shirt

Why couldn't you ask to talk sooner?
Your timing was late,
And now I may never know

Author notes

Just a few things I didn't want to say to anyone but had to say... if that makes any sense.

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  • ashley-dani
    November 17, 2008

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    This brings up memories. This was a really great poem. It makes sense, sometimes you can't really tell someone in person. Sometimes it's just easier to write it down.


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    this is very seductive takes me back to my youth the scent of aftershave left on my clothes, from him the night before, my heartbeat quickening ooh i got goos bumps now, this is great really strong and gritty
    thanks
    littlefishone