Why do I miss you so much?
I just saw you last night,
And yet it wasn't enough
Was I imagining little moments?
Your hand reaching out for mine,
A smile dancing across your face
Were you trying to get me alone?
You were staring so intently,
I have a witness to the event
Why did you look at me like that?
You were being so serious,
Holding my hand again before I left
Why can't my mind be distracted?
All I could to was listen to the engine,
And smell your Curve on my shirt
Why couldn't you ask to talk sooner?
Your timing was late,
And now I may never know
Author notes
Just a few things I didn't want to say to anyone but had to say... if that makes any sense.
Honest opinion please
Comments
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This brings up memories. This was a really great poem. It makes sense, sometimes you can't really tell someone in person. Sometimes it's just easier to write it down.


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this is very seductive takes me back to my youth the scent of aftershave left on my clothes, from him the night before, my heartbeat quickening ooh i got goos bumps now, this is great really strong and gritty
thanks
littlefishone




