Oh it's the season
I smell it in the air,
Fall is here it's everywhere.
Look up in the sky,
It's clear to see the stars,
Golden leaves on the ground.
Silence has been found,
Your no-where around,
Gone like the breeze.
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this kinda reminds me of the White Stripes first hit: Dead leaves on the dirty ground and i know that your not around. But you got a completely individual take on this, nice write
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Very touching, so elaborate and discriptive. Loved the poetic touch to the feeling in your heart.
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Thank you goalsv as you know I have not posted in some time, just dont know whats a matter with my thoughts on poetry, cant seem to get off of the passing of my husband, I know I will one day but gee its been so long now and well im ready.....
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I will be praying for you, for the healing of the pain and the healing of your writting muse. We have missed your poetic voice and look forward to having you back. Losing a close loved one takes a lot of time and never really heals fully. With Gods help it can be achieved.
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SAD, SO SAD!!
Fall can be so beautiful and when ones loved one is missing this beauty becomes so much harder to see.
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