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No Harm Meant

his compliments have been falling on two deaf ears
her replies pressed from two muted lips
he's been trying for what has seemed like years
and she's starting to get a little pissed

she's been avoiding his voice and eyes like the plague
concedes to some phone calls, regrets they're so hissed
he thinks she's playing him out for a gag
they're both regretting the first time they kissed

later on, she shares her concerns with dear mom
she figures by now, he should have gotten the gist
guess not - he invites her out to the prom
she refuses by offering her delicate, gloved fist

Author notes

Crappy place to be in, for either side. Mostly non-autobiographical.

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  • Fitz1901
    November 15, 2008

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    I can feel you man, been there myself

    I like the rhyme pattern, it keeps the poem somewhat lighthearted but still serious.

    Thanks for the read