Reserved!!!! Working on Dont Read!!!!

Seduction laces glass
piercing the inner remains
of my soul;

dressed to undress
silk flourishing the hills
of a woman,

I breath

will he speak his mind,
or follow his heart:

my body clatters
to be his feast
an ocean ripples to the floor
as I find his hands sliding down
to my hips,
and pulling me back to him;

his lips trace my neck,
fingers caress my arms
leaving the spirit of two

UNFINISHED!

DONT COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author notes

prompt: there is truth in wine

A contest entry

there is truth in wine by And Hyetal. 850 points, ended December 26, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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And Hyetal
December 21, 2008
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is this done yet?
notorious
November 23, 2008
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Ditto Jackie's comment. ;
kiwigirljacks
November 16, 2008

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I didn't read I promise.. I quickly scrolled to the comment box

Let me know when it's done ok