My veins are pumping blood to my heart
trying to remind it that I promised
no I swore this would never happen again
but I suppose hours of planning
and days of talking to my reflection
are no match for the moment.
Author notes
I tried not to use the word in the poem, hope it still turned out okay.
42 words
A contest entry
- impulse; everyone needs it by written-in-ink.
700 points, ended November 27, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
criticm welcome.
Comments
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no they arent
and i dont think that they ever will be
in that momment everything changes
and
everything
everything
means nothing anymore
glad to know you can understand that
<33
thank you and good luck -
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