I like
Listening to you
Just to hear your voice
You trace my lips
And smile
I kiss you
I'm not thinking
Just feeling
You
run your fingers
Through my tangled hair
I'm laughing
As you take my hand
I don't even love you
But I like this
It's impulse
Author notes
This is not based on personal experience.
One night. Prom, homecoming, maybe something else
They meet.
It's not love, but it's something
On monday they'll go back to what they were to each other,
but tonight it's something
[more than a crush less than love]
An impulse relationship...
Sorry, it's not very good. :]
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Comments
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still in llove with it by the way...
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Well done. You've described a whimsical romance perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
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ok
i understand this so well
amazing
like
"You trace my lips
And smile "
*sigh*
i always fall for that one
I'm laughing
As you take my hand
I don't even love you
But I like this
It's impulse
[So fun]
me in a nutshell right now
great job
i loved it so much
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