A dream laden albino spider
spun silk
from my bedpost
to the bottom tip of the crescent moon
and back down unto yours
just so i could capture
another moment with you.
A contest entry
- Preying Moon by misticmoonlite.
470 points, ended November 17, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I would have called this Woven into Night...
loved it...tender and beautiful!
ears/Seattle
will talk to you privately about how I would structure
this jewel of a poem!
ears/seattle sis
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Super cool...I can see that spider a-crawling and a-weaving on her ass
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you have this kind of way with your pen my friend that just shows no matter what, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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A wonderfully gentle and loving take. Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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Ah . . . ethereal magic!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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you penned this with passion and respect for one
special person..I hope she liked, thank you for this entry, good luck
Linda
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thanx but it was just a generic write, just the mushy muse speaking up.
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