You are a man, just a man,
why do you haunt me so.
I gave you so much love,
knowing you had to go.
You spoke loving words,
I fell so hard for you.
Everynight I fall asleep
my heart breaks in two.
I hide the pain inside,
no one sees my heart weep.
Save my tears for dark night,
then cry myself to sleep.
In slumber I can be with you,
there once more I smile.
In dreams you love me again,
pain leaves for a little while.
Once more eyes start to weep.
as day dawns truth rushes in.
Lay in deep thought missing,
our love that had been.
A contest entry
- The Feelings you get by ChaingangAngel.
400 points, ended November 29, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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Wow.
I felt my heart beating faster as I read this ... this is amazing, deep, touching and beautifully sad
Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
Love to You
~Manda
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Lovely Comment. Thank you for reading. Take care. Sandy
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Thank you Amanda, Love to you too. Thank you for reading. Take care, Sandy
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This is such an emotional poem, that seems to be torn straight from the heart, it reaches out and grabs the heart of the reader, I really enjoyed this read, you have an awesome talent, blessings with love John
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Lovely Coment
Thank you John. This was writen from my heart. You are always so encouraging. Hugs and Smiles
Love and Blessingsm Sandy
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Awesome !
Snndy,
Totally awesome ! I can hea you're psin ! You have lived through some pretty tough timea ! Keep up the great work my friend.
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Good Morning Peter
Thank you for the lovely coment. You were always so enocouraging. You take care.
Blessings to you,
Sandy
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