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If You..

If you were a star brightly shining in the night sky...the heavens would duplicate you among the darkness...

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  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 17, 2008
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    Beautiful. Full of imagery and metphorical speaking. Bravo and thank you for your entry.


  • catalyst.
    November 16, 2008

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    I love the simplicity of this.
    It is so short and yet so long. In the sense that you can re-read it a thousand times and make it mean a thousand things. So everyone can take it personally.
    Great Write