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The Dragon Song

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Poem written by Mairéad Murphy
The Dragon Song” written and performed on Irish flute by Mairéad Murphy

 

Two choices!

Music alone
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or!

Music and my reading of the poem

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A rowan tree speaks:

“O’ pleasant Úna,
whose hair carries the scent of lily and dew
Step onward toward my whisper, dearest fair.
Walk, for the siren hath broken the fog
and thine feet do not leave sully to the snow before me.
I call upon thee to wake him with the dragon song!”

~The land was fragile in silent winter.
Sombre and gleaming,

breaking where he lucent dust lay atop it.

Yearning for comfort.
The soil is brittle,

lilting in the vernal wake.
Now, where it begs snapping underneath
for the flute of dear Úna

and singing these words
“Give strength to his bough and roots.”~

~A tranquil gust swiftly carried the lambent jewels
east to the horizon’s belly, upon it wrapped
tightly with the rowan tree’s voice. Flying now
where Úna rests her fanciful head.~

 



 ~Pretty she, with silk laid ‘pon her curves,.
a gown of the white petals
she of Luis borne.
A bow of twigs and leaves set in her silver hair
curling in the gusts ‘round
a signature of ice and water
setting in her feathery blue eyes.~

~Descent of the moon she fell
from his hands like a dulcet rain.
She of blossoms fell ‘pon rowan’s arm.
And in fire’s scarlet berry had she lived
among Brigid’s ashes.
Awaking the green dragon
from bright lightning and twittering moon
to lay his scales upon the branches
of Ogham’s February tree.~


~Sapient hands, she had pulsing
to the rhythm of the tundra

and the soft blending
of misty snow.
Flying hands, like an echo
on the flute’s wooden beam.~

~Dear Úna stood among the trees. Placing a foot
where the ample starlight trickled down
in white prisms and blue fog.
Through the arbour’s thinning hair
a motley bird of green and rainbow,
bold eyes of amber and wise face of sage
had an expression of stone
with a diamond inside and said,
“All of Elphame, your music summons”~

 



He let down his old hand
from the stormy moon and worlds afar,
a lifting eye had Luis been hatched
like the egg beneath the robin’s breast.
To Úna’s airy dragon song,
in the vernal wake for his scales to lay
the green of Imbolg’s aging year,
"Lá Fhéile Bríde."
All across this land.

The Rowan Tree speaks:

“My precious Úna,
whose song is of breaking ice
and clearing fog.
Come lay beneath the rowan tree this cerulean dawn.
Sanction to these feelings for you will be longing
to tiptoe in the transient mystery and wait at the doorstep,
of Ostara night.
No passing breeze will amount to the melody of thine flute.
For you precious Úna

are of Luis borne.”

 

Author notes

Úna is pronounced O-na

That is me playing Irish flute...little out of tune...yeah what cha goin’ to do about it? I also used my feet as a drum if you can hear it. The link to the music is occasionally being a butthead...so give it hell.

This poem is really just a creation of mine but based on factors of Norse and Celtic mythology. The premise of the poem is about an elfish flautist named Úna awakening a dragon to place his scales on the rowan tree and break winter allowing spring to come forth.

The Rowan tree was believed to be magical tree which grew red berries that were the food of the gods. These berries were so sacred that it was believed that the Gods guarded them jealously and kept them from man. The Druids believed that the Creator, Celi who was an invisible god, manifested in nature including the restless elements such as lightning, which was also associated with Dragons. Dragons are associated with new life and thus this period of time is also associated with the coming of new life out of the dark winter.

The Ogham alphabet/calender named Rowan’s month Luis.

The rowan is also prominent in Norse mythology as the tree from which the first woman was made (Úna is of Luis borne)

Imbolg is one of the four principal festivals of the Irish calendar, celebrated among Gaelic peoples and some other Celtic cultures either at the beginning of February or at the first local signs of Spring. Most commonly it is celebrated on February 2, since this is the cross-quarter day on the solar calendar, halfway between the Winter Solstice and the Spring Equinox in the northern hemisphere.

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  • Mairéad, you are one helluva writer! I was wrapped around the writer's finger at word one!
    This was awesomely amazing!!! Thanks for showing me this!
    You got my muse piqued! Brava, sweet lady!


    • Random Goldfish gold member
      January 10
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      Go raibh maith agat, mo chara! I'm very thankful for your comment. And use what ever inspiration endlessly. Take it wherever it comes from, right?

      Síochán leat
      ~Mairéad~


  • DragonflyDream
    January 7

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    fantastic!

    it really has a ballad like quality to it
    and you tell the story well
    very Irish
    I like it

    DD


    • Random Goldfish gold member
      January 7
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      Thank you...this one was an absolute labour...it actually started with just the music.

      Síochán leat
      ~Mairéad~


  • Angelflower
    December 14, 2008

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    I have always loved mythology, and I really loved this one for sure! yep, I'd say your Irish..lol. Have a talent to tell stories and bring the reader into. Thanks much for sharing! I truly loved it! and the music too, even if out of tune point is that it's from the heart


    Angel


    • Random Goldfish gold member
      December 14, 2008
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      I'm glad you enjoy mythology, doesn't it rock?
      Thank you so much for the comments on my story and mediocre flute playing, hehe. Have a beautiful day.


  • Lowell Poe
    December 5, 2008

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    The seasons like the Celtic circle...
    one after another to the beginning again.
    Nature...the Druids God.
    Creator of stardust that brings magic to me heart.....you.
    I read this...then heard your reading with the music...
    Absolutely stunning work....do you have a slight brogue..
    I thought i heard a wee bit of one....your speaking voice is angelic and your imagination is amazing.
    Is this the only place you put your work...?
    This needs to been seen by as many people as possible...
    I know i am sentimental to the old ways......but your work puts me back...they remind me of stories of mythical tales that raised our eyebrows and made us pondered as children.
    Now renewed and revised with great sophistication...you bring that sense of wonderment back.........
    and that is a good thing....a very good thing.

    Bless you gypsy,
    Liam


    • Random Goldfish gold member
      December 5, 2008
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      Thank you very much. I like telling stories. I think it helps me and others understand what goes on in my head more clearly. There's no way for me to exactly describe what goes on up there but to tell the scenes in song or story.

      I have a slight accent. It's toned down a lot as I've gotten into radio and other things that require clear speaking...you can still hear it in my vowels no matter what I do though, but when I'm yelling, haha, can't hide a thing.

      I usually only post my stuff here. I have a few other places that I go to on occasion.


  • astrum infractus
    November 22, 2008

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    Hey Mairead! I'm returning the favour! I'm so glad you liked mine, thanks for the encouragment and advice! Wow, this poem is amazing, you are so talented! "A signature of ice and water setting in her feathery blue eyes." was my fave part. The whole thing is so beautiful and unique; I loved it! abi x x x PS. <--- I picked that in my garden especially for you! Hehe!


    • Random Goldfish gold member
      November 22, 2008
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      Aw, thank you for the clover! It will have a speical place in my collection. (Have a couple four leafs!)

      Also, thank you for the comment! I appreciate it very much. I hope you have a beautiful day! Night actually, it's almost 9:30 isn't it? Haha, either way, keep it lovely.

      Síochán leat
      ~Mairéad~


  • Cannonsfire
    November 22, 2008

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    This is wonderful and so is the music even if a little out of tune, I must say I was delighted by your page and by your talent for words and music, and I will return to read more. C


    • Random Goldfish gold member
      November 22, 2008
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      Thank you very much for your comments and your visit! The music was playing on a very old wooden flute that had gotten mistreated by its previous owner. It had a crack in it! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Blessed be!

      Síochán leat
      ~Mairéad~


  • faderman1959
    November 21, 2008

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    Beautifully done! I listened to you play the music and speak your poem. It added so much to the feel of the poem! This was such a pleasure to read and hear! Thanks for such a wonderful experience!

  • Eusebius
    November 17, 2008

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    A most intersting and very unique narritive piece of verse here, heavy with Celtic images... bravo... bravo... bravo...


    • Random Goldfish gold member
      November 17, 2008
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      Thank you very much. And your message was helpful. I now see how that section of notes was unclear!

      Síochán leat
      ~Mairéad~

  • scoff
    November 16, 2008

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    I can hardly find words

    to praise this.

    Altogether beautiful.

    The vocabulary was absolutely outstanding. The imagery was fabulous, bursting with sights and sounds. The story was intriguing. The flow was wonderful, carrying me along all the way to the end.

    Very enjoyable.


    • Random Goldfish gold member
      November 16, 2008

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      Thank you, I knew there was a reason Mom told me to use a dictonary...you might be looking up one word but then another one by it will catch your eye!

      Again, thank you for your comments.
      Síochán leat
      ~Mairéad~


  • JinSays gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    . . .and she did! That's my Moony mama, she's always lookng out for me
    I ahve a few questions, nothing I cannot find in Wiki, but isn't this also the festival of goddess Brigid? Okay, Im a little murky there, but anyway. . . .I LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem!
    There is so much to love about it, and forgive me, but it works abosutely wonderfully without the music to
    But I did listen, just cause you said it was you playing.
    This is an extraordinary piece.
    I am blown away, truly.
    Much love,
    Jin

    P.S
    Is Ona the same entity as Danu? again. . .just wondering


    • Random Goldfish gold member
      November 16, 2008
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      Thank you, this is quite the wonderful comment. Thanks for taking a peak at the music too, I think it really adds to it.

      Yes, Imbolg is another name for the fire festival of Brigid and I've let this poem describe some of the mythology around it, with my own touched of course.

      Úna is just a Gaelic name I happen to like, but good call! It's Gaelic for Winifred but it's meaning is rather unknown and I'm still not sure of it's origins.

      Thank you, once again!

      Síochán leat
      ~Mairéad~


  • moon2u
    November 16, 2008

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    This is such an enchanting story poem
    wistful and magical
    I am going to send it to someone on A.P. whom I know would love to read it as well.

    applause


    • Random Goldfish gold member
      November 16, 2008
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      Thank you so much for visiting! And even more for your comments. I hope your friend enjoys it as well.

      Síochán leat
      ~Mairéad~


      • moon2u
        November 16, 2008
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        I am actually in the process of sending it to several poets I know would love it.
        I have also put a link on my page on the comment I replied back to you.

        I hope many new readers find your page young lady, you are very talented.

        hugs Moony

        • Random Goldfish gold member
          November 16, 2008
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          Oh wow! Thank you! You are very kind.


          • moon2u
            November 16, 2008
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            I was able to download your music and listen to it and I must say I liked it very much. I sometimes make little home-made video's with art and music and it would make wonderful background music for a video.

            applause

            • Random Goldfish gold member
              November 16, 2008
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              Hey, go for it! ^_^


              • moon2u
                November 16, 2008
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                I would never use your creation without asking you first
                and if I ever did use it
                you would be credited as the artist always

                My life is chaotic right now
                in the middle of moving

                but it is something to think about
                you could actually use it on here if you incorporated it into a video poem. It would be a way for the reader to hear and read your work similtaneously.

                we could use art with dragons and forests and moon pics
                and maidens etc

                just thoughts


                • Random Goldfish gold member
                  November 16, 2008
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                  I hope your move goes well. And you are welcome to use my song if you like. I was just inspired to take the time to do a reading and post it at the top of the page, for that I thank you.

  • Amethyst MoonShadow
    November 15, 2008

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    Wow!

    I dll the music and I thought you did a wonderful job personally! It fitted this perfectly. The story itself was amazingly written. So full of imagery-detailed visuals that made it seem so alive! Delightful writing and reading!


    • Random Goldfish gold member
      November 15, 2008
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      Thank you very much. The first comment get on a poem often means so much to me because then I stop worrying about how good it is, LOL, maybe I'm a paranoided poet too.

      Anyway, thank you for the delightful review.
      Have an incredible day.

      Síochán leat
      ~Mairéad~

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