Silently you watch lovers caress
Then you steal a heart away
Dressing up in Bandit clothes
Going where nobody knows
Alone I scream despair
Silver rays shine down on her
Seducing caress of dappled light
Midnight swims within her eyes
Sweeping her softly away
gone whilst sun shine out a day
You are a Bandit of love Moon
Swelling silver in your light cocoon
Surrounded by your sister stars
I know who you really are
and where you go by light of day
A contest entry
- Preying Moon by misticmoonlite.
470 points, ended November 17, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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this is a clever creation you have put together here, beautiful, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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A creative and beautiful take on the prompt... Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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very nice as Bandit of the moon is what becomes of her at daybreak, nice entry here , thank you and good luck
Linda
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