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Close Your Eyes

Give in to the darkness
Breathe in the blackness
Listen to the stillness

Mind
Body
Soul


Surround yourself with blissful solitude
Surrender to the abyss
Allow yourself to float

Free


Disconected from the world

Unhindered by worry and sadness

Released from the pain

 

Tranquility reigns

 

Cleansing your heart

Clearing your mind

 

Close your eyes

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Title Prompt: Close Your Eyes

My muse seems to be raised (atleast a little bit) from the dead

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  • checkmate-
    November 30, 2008

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    I'm glad your muse is only half-dead

    Great poem! I love the word choice!


    I wish I could do that sometimes.


    Good luck and thanks for entering!

  • Black-Fang
    November 19, 2008

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    i really like this its very relaxing
    i wish i could just relax like that

    good luck in the contest


  • StarIlluminated
    November 19, 2008
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    This is really really good Katrina, it flows really well and i really like it a lot!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    Sometimes I'd like to close my eyes and do just that.. disconnect from the world.

    Great write hun.