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Holiday dinnertime

cranberry smears the bird
and smears the eager faces
of hungry children

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  • Cynewulf
    November 29, 2008
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    I am not sure what holiday this refers to but it is a very good visual image. Well done!

  • carole21
    November 17, 2008
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    funny write . . thanks for the contest entry


  • crimsondew
    November 16, 2008
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    Delicious!!!

    Good haiku here!