I wish I had a hairband
For one moment of peace
I wish I had one hairband today
Deep into a windy day
I took a step outside, was thrown to a wall
Prepared to hate the weather today
This day will annoy me like never before
Hair tied back blows hard
Hair left out blows harder
I wish I had a hairband
For one moment of peace
I wish I had some hairband
So my hair would stay in its place
Thought not how it would blow
Looked not outside my window …
Oh! I wish I had a hairband today!
I ate more hair than was my lunch
Not something I wanted to munch
Hair tied back blows hard
Hair left out blows harder
I wish I had a hairband
For one moment of peace
I wish I had some hairband
So my hair would stay in its place
Thought not how it would blow
Looked not outside my window …
Oh! I wish I had a hairband today!
Worst chose time, so now I’m
Wearing a mask of annoyance
Capricious, gusts every way
Millionth time I tried, I spat my hair out in vain
Something blew in
My eye, can’t win
When this wind stops I will rejoice
Hair tied back blows hard
Hair left out blows harder
I wish I had a hairband
For one moment of peace
I wish I had some hairband
So my hair would stay in its place
Thought not how it would blow
Looked not outside my window …
Oh! I wish I had a hairband today!
Author notes
This is a parody of "Wish I Had An Angel" by Nightwish, and I intended it to have the same tune.
If you don't know the song, here's a link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qiZ9ULkq1xM
And here are the original lyrics: http://www.metrolyrics.com/wish-i-had-an-angel-lyrics-nightwish.html (if you don't want to use the little scroll-y thing, scroll down the page to see them)
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A contest entry
- RHYMING TO YOUR FAVORITE SONG!!!!!! by cbsbecm88.
550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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haha this is funny!
Title-9 definitely caught my interest!
Flow-8 good flow but it got choppy in some places...
Rules-8 didn't quite rhyme that well and was a bit to many lines
Creativity-9.5 there is no doubt this poem is creative!
Song-9 i like the idea of a parody and this sounded like a song itself!
Total-43.5
thanks! good luck! -
pretty cute. thank you for entering
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nicley written
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