She waits for you
high heels to thigh highs
leaninig up against your car
She lights a ciggarette
As you draw near
you watch a beautiful stranger
as she pulls up her skirt
Arousal overcomes,
until faced with the barrel of a gun
Bang Bang
Another name crossed off her list
Author notes
http://www.allposters.com/-sp/Coupe-Posters_i415828_.htm
A contest entry
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Comments
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really like this one
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totally thanking you chica
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suggestion:
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Short, and to the point! I like in odd sort of way! I guess that will teach ya, no looking up the girls dress... hehe.
Best of luck in this contest!
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Damn, that was rather unexpected. A real femme fatale in all her raunchy glory. I like it.
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That's what you get for staring up her dress
A wicked twist makes this a great read... Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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I really love where you took the prompt. you did an excellent job.
good luck
kat
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Very cool take on the picture! You can never trust a sexy stranger.. she might just be an assassin undercover 
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Very well done, wouldn't want to be him!
Best wishes
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