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Luna dawdles!

Wanderer...

roves skies

beacons glare
blinds darkened soul
to erring ways

Stars guide journey
through times destined fate

appointment with Sol
morning lover

blaze of conscription's thrust
fades, day's dawn

and nights last shudder

A contest entry

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  • Draig aine gold member
    December 17, 2008
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    ah yes my friend

    now here is a story I can fully comprehend


  • sunoir
    November 15, 2008
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    Nice write and I loved the way you ended it.


  • KayJay
    November 15, 2008

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    A very enjoyable read... so many aspects shown like the phases of the moon. Well done and best of luck.
    Ken


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    This is wonderful and I enjoyed reading this! Good luck in the contest


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    oh so true, the moon lets us know of her ways and times to shine and reflect, thank you for this entry and good luck
    Linda

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