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Moon Goddess

She rides the skies
Her radience shining
Moon Goddess

Silvery wings taking flight
Take her to restfullness
Moon Goddess

Times and seasons
Rituals united
Moon Goddess

I bathe in your brightnes
Naked and purified
Moon Goddess


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  • KayJay
    November 15, 2008

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    Lovely imagery and praise for her beauty and charms... Well done and best of luck.
    Ken
    (last stanza - "brightness")

  • Bob Fox
    November 15, 2008
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    Purified

    A wonderful concept. Pirification for all and then perhaps peace. A beautiful poem my lady.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    wow this is a true emotional piece as she does make on feel so humble in here presence, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Linda