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Yearning Eyes

I watch with yearning eyes.

You look back and wonder why.

The blade cuts deep into her skin,she screams.

He looks back and asks are you sure you want to see this.

Yes I say I want to as much as you.

He moves the blade to her throat.

My lips quaver.

blood slowly seeps out,and she lets out a gurgling scream.

My heart is pounding,He sees my interest and continues.

Her face contorts in pain,the blade moves to her chest.

He cuts the last of her clothing off.

Then cuts her heart out slowly.

I feel someting i've never felt before.

She looks at me with hope,That I might save her.

He pulls her heart out.

She starts to hypervenalate.

I say to him "I want to see more".

He says "Of course".

He looks at me and hands me the blade.

"But first you must show me what you can do".

 

 

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  • Devilish Temptation
    November 24, 2008
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    yummy lol this piece got me all hot and flusterd
    I enjoyed reading this very much

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