I love you so much
that I know not
where you
begin
and
I
end
Author notes
prompt:- I am your lover...and I want you to tell me how much you love me..using only 1 line. (Please..make it the length of a normal sentence, and not one line that is as long as a paragraph )
picture credit:- http://delfee.deviantart.com/art/Ent-lovers-62093061
A contest entry
- 1 Line, 1 hour...Go!!!...prewrites allowed (as long as criteria is met) by Timeless Wisdom.
750 points, ended November 17, 2008, 32 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Silver to Gold by Nicada.
400 points, ended December 1, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 5-15 Words: Blow Me Away by xxRainbowDawnxx.
600 points, ended January 2, 96 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a wonderful penning, intermingled sensations wrap each other sighs in rough and smooth twists of passion.
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first i must say congrats to the two silver trophies. although i must admit that i would give you a gold because this is a very powerful message that you have here. that when we are so in love with someone that we are so one that we almost don't know which is which (lol). i'm so much in love with this little write that i added it to my bookmark. this is the first poem that i have place on my bookmark---lots of contests but only this one poem thus far. what a wonderful write with an amazing picture. very well done! i'm very pleased to have seen this piece. continue the great works...i have you as a favorite now so don't disappoint me i'm going to be checking out another of your works soon... ;0)
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I know this VERY well. Considering the guy I am with at the moment... He and I used to be different and since we are dating, we are almost like two parts of the same mirror reflection. He is my darling.
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wow!
'where you
begin
and
I
end '
What an ending so powerful.
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this is a good poem that deserves more than silver.
Love has no beginning or emd .It just esists!!1
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Great job with the prompt here! So much is said in just one line. Great job, and thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
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Short and sweet
I wish I could write with such candor and use so few words.
Lovely work
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Such beautiful words of love, dear sis...
congrat's on the trophy, well deserved...
Love,
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Perfection x
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Great poem
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Neat
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so beautiful put together the picture is amazing and as beautiful as the words you have attached to it.
God bless yo my friend...
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Pretty.
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OMG!!!!! Wonderful!! I love the picture that you used to support the poem...very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Poet
Soft and simple. So few words but so much said in the end. smiles here.
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