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impulsive lips

The joy of humanity,

impromptu decisions

embarassing mistakes.

 

Lessons of life,

humbling, powerful,

age-less innocence.

 

The t-shirt read:

U T A H

souvenir of Vast Grand Canyon.

 

Upon mirrors reflection;

"honey..when did we tour....

H A T U....! "

 

Laughter fills the belly,

eyes roll for heavens view,

"oh my dear,"  he replies, "how I do love you."

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Contest prompt: "impulse"
sorry, I did 52 words...

(i have nothing to say in my defense....perhaps the sun was in my eyes,
shoes too tight, or hair more "blonde" then I was aware...)

impulse can be so embarassing, age-less and innocent.

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  • written-in-ink
    November 24, 2008

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    lol
    very funny story
    lol
    hahah

    thank you for sharing
    and
    haha
    i love it
    <33


  • georgie
    November 15, 2008

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    lmao... reminds me of an old internet friend of mine. i was typing to him one day and he asked what i was drinking... i said XXXX ... he was like... can u say that on mic please? im dyslexic lmao. believe me ive done plenty of stupid things myself that left people in stitches... just the other day our roomies were out so i thought id sneak to the toilet naked while they werent here... only thing was... the landlord (a really old guy) was in here to ask him and i opened my bedroom door just as he was about to knock... i screamed coz no one was meant to be home and i thought he was going to have a heart attack... lol. luckily hes never brought it up again lol... another time in england, but a part i had never been to i was like... why are all the roads in this part called MO7S... hubby just looked at me and said... ermmm thats SLOW ... i was looking at it upside down coz he had to park his truck from the opposite end to deliver to shops... shame lol.
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx
    gods all that and i never even commented on your poem really,
    a very funny piece and flows well,
    i loved the last line... its good to make our husbands laugh even though we might feel silly at the time... and i can just picture the laughter on his face


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    November 15, 2008

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    hehehe only you
    great write!

    Tasha


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 15, 2008

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    wow, this is something i have a friend who entered this one too, and you both did a great job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Alyzeh
    November 15, 2008

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    Awww.. this is the sweetest I've read all day. Seriously, I think I can relate to this very well, we all have our shiny moments. Hehe! A great write. It deserves a gold! Excellent work!

    Much love,
    Alyzeh

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