Wind upon her face
she has traced a thousand footsteps
in search of silence
to old memories of the past...
Faded are the glimpses
through her worn eyes
she is a lone traveller
looking for rest.
Life as she sees
just cannot be anymore
she faces void
in total destitution.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt... by ariazephyrzoe.
1000 points, ended November 21, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wind upon her face
she has traced a thousand footsteps
in search of silence
Loved those lines!
I love the movements that flowed with it.
Hi Ms Mo,
Thank you for supporting me with my first contest.
Anna Lee


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Hi Ms Anna Lee!

Thanks for having me & glad to be here in support of your very first! I've read some great entries on here, and I wait for your next contest!!!!

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You create such vivid moods with your imagery here with this woman of mystery. One can feel the weariness, and age that has crept up with time...A moving expressive write!


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