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Tattered & Torn...



Wind upon her face

she has traced a thousand footsteps

in search of silence

to old memories of the past...

Faded are the glimpses

through her worn eyes

she is a lone traveller

looking for rest.

Life as she sees

just cannot be anymore

she faces void

in total destitution.




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  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    Wind upon her face
    she has traced a thousand footsteps
    in search of silence

    Loved those lines!
    I love the movements that flowed with it.

    Hi Ms Mo,

      Thank you for supporting me with my first contest.

    Anna Lee

     


    • Mozaic
      November 20, 2008

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      Hi Ms Anna Lee!
      Thanks for having me & glad to be here in support of your very first! I've read some great entries on here, and I wait for your next contest!!!!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    You create such vivid moods with your imagery here with this woman of mystery. One can feel the weariness, and age that has crept up with time...A moving expressive write!


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 15, 2008

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    Wow,