i.
quenching dreams
a structured society of
false reality
ii.
a spark so strong
forbidden,a sudden desire
only an impulse
somewhat predictable
iii.
lost among the way
trading heartbeats with
strangers for the rush
of a past love and
awaiting present paramours.
iv.
knocked to her knees
immortilized impulses
Author notes
Im not sure about this poem i dont really like any of my poems
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It is indeed... it's like a reflex, a natural reaction we don't realise is taking place, til it actually has.
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I really liked this. The title was awesome. Drew me in. Matched the poem lovely.
Thank you very much for your entry. Good luck and well done. -
This is differant in a good way.liked the thought process in this and you show great originality.Great job.
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lost among the way
trading heartbeats with
strangers for the rush
of a past love and
awaiting present paramours.
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love that part
think that it is going very well
and i love the ending
thank you so much and
good luck! -
well, i like it ^^
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