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(#9) Father Christmas is Real

Father Christmas is Real

All of Santa’s clothes
are red
apart from his boots
and his buttons and his black belt

White hair and beard
sprout from his head
in his hands
he holds magic

He loves children
it is said
his smile and his eyes
are twinkling

He brings their presents
while they’re in their bed
how he manages
they have no inkling

His magic and his reindeer
must be fed
with carrots and mince pies
and some milk for drinking

You don’t need to feel
that you are being misled
Santa Claus is just
a Christmas way of thinking

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  • dashpoet
    November 17, 2008
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    nb. Contest Prompt Number: I initially headed this poem '#3' - I've no idea why I typed that! I've edited to '#9', which is as intended. Sorry to confuse.


  • daviscth silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    I really enjoyed the imagery in your poem. It makes me feel like a kid again. Thanks so much for sharing with us.


  • Snowing Kisses silver member
    November 15, 2008
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    this is a whimsical little poem, full of christmas magic i enjoyed it very much
    thanks

    • dashpoet
      November 15, 2008
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      Thank you for your kind comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem in the spirit that I wrote it. Shame it's only November!

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