It takes all these restraints
plus, so many more.
A full fixture of fluent focus
(stranded at shore)
For your beauty overwhelms
you're so highlighted.
I've been enticed by desire;
once you were sighted.
Author notes
30-40 words
A contest entry
- impulse; everyone needs it by written-in-ink.
700 points, ended November 27, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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For your beauty overwhelms
you're so highlighted.
I've been enticed by desire;
once you were sighted.
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mdae me smile
so hard you have no idea
i think you did an amazing job with the prompt
thank you and good luck
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hehe, this flows so well, and made me smile, so lovely
good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥ -
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Thank you for your review of it hahaha its a bit brash hahhaa
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