Going on with LIFE
not knowing how to EXIST
going out my head with hidden STRIFE
wondering if I should DIE
Memories are DEFINED
till it's the anger that REMAINS
I can FEEL
I can SEE
the ANGER clear in my MIND
This place is where I hope to HIDE
claw out my feelings from the INSIDE
Lost reality invades my daily life
I'm so BLIND
Anger filling the hole in my cold but beating heart
misery has come to be my best friend
darkness escaping making me have to restart
the hate all over again
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wow, that was great! I can totally relate to this.
"in my cold but beating heart"
love this! amazing!
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This was good. I can feel the anger, very good emotional vibe... It was a nice read :]
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GREAT
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wow
great use of words, i love how you used caps at the end of most of the lines. i also love how you used cap for anger.. shows how at the time this person is very hurt and angry. good job
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I really like this poem,I like how you capitalized the whole words like BLIND,and HIDE.
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