slight whirl of breeze
stirs dry brown leaves
chasing each other
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A contest entry
- 48 hours to Haiku by azure85.
900 points, ended November 21, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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It sets a beautiful scene, that autumn wind whivch blows so cold, there is something magical about those mini-whirlwinds picking up leaves and spinning them about.
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slight whirl of breeze
stirs dry brown leaves
chasing each other
A good set of images of the season, with the swirl of leaves and the breeze. Thank you so much.
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What a lovely picture painted here...Just beautiful!
Good luck!
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loved it
perfect
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That's a great scene and well done. Good luck in the contest.
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Nice job. I have seen this image many times. I think that you have captured it well.
Mike -
This is a great idea and really visual in its presentation.
Good luck with contest! -
the last line makes this haiku original
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