Your love lives in little pockets
that are sewn up on my heart
Assurance that I'll never get lonely
If life ever keeps us apart...
Author notes
25 words or less pic credit: http://www.flickr.com/search/?q=hearts+pocket&page=12
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A contest entry
- Short Poems ( 25 words or less) by misticmoonlite.
660 points, ended November 19, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hey thanks
for spreading my name 'round here!
this one makes me want to sew little hearts into the pockets of all my pants.....
much luv!
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Brevity is the soul of wit. Nice write.
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Short & sweet!
What a very cute & clever write here
If someone said something like that to me, I'd melt
like an old cassette on a dashboard in mid-July.
thanks for sharing & g'luck in the contest!
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great shorty you have here ... and i love them pockets ... i keep a lot in them ...
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First 2 lines. Fab. I Loved it. Short, Simple, Sweet. Welldone!
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Very sweet... and such a nice change from all the "needles in the heart" writes
Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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awww this is so cute, I had not seen anything expressed like this before, heart warming to read, thank you for this entry and good luck
Linda
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awww, that's cute ^^
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