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Life Haiku

is life, time, belief ~

certain karma or is it

all existential

 

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Thinking about life and it's meanings helped me write this poem -- it is probably really a Senryu, but that is being a bit too strict!

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  • You've nicely expressed your pondering here.


  • azure85 gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    is life, time, belief ~
    certain karma or is it
    all existential

    It is very philosophical and fitting to be written in a haiku form. A senryu contain the human element, and does this really exist within the reality of what we do or do not know? Good ending in L3, thank you for a good thinking haiku.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    You ask a question I am not sure any of us will ever answer. Beautifully done be it haiku or serynu. Best to you dear Bandit.


  • Draig aine gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    hmm

    and the answer is????


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    Good write

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