Snowflakes
Winter beauty
Dripping love from heaven
Playfully dancing in the snow
A most precious gift from our fathers love
Icicles upon frozen homes
fire-places burning
Children sledding
Winter
Author notes
Winter~rictameter
A contest entry
- Winter by haley27.
450 points, ended December 17, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow. This was amazing. It makes me really miss Maine, where I grew up. We don't have winters here in Texas. Just a slightly less hot state of eternal summer. I loved this.
Write on.
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Aww this was really sweet.. I have snow on my porch now, and though it's cold jsut to look at it's still beautiful.. you did a wonderful job hun.. Best of luck in the contest..
Angel
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A wonderful poem
Beautiful imagery
I wish it snowed here, but oh well -
great write! i loved the image this poem paints in mind. it has a child-like innocence and its so pretty ♥ keep penning
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Your poem paints a nice Christmas card-like feeling of "Father's" ♥
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Great pictur you write. Sounds inviting.
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this is cute
I liked the feel of winter in your poem. Wonderful metaphors and the lines are not forced. Thank you for coming to my contest. Good luck in the contest. Haley27
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