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Screwed

What did we ever do?
Are we here alone?
Whose prayers here have been answered?
silence...
Amen!
Are we a mistake?
Who here says yes?
silence...
Hallelujah!
Sorry to break it to ya folks.

God just might have screwed us over.

silence... 

Amen!

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  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    INteresting.
    Kind of like you think we're all going to hell here.
    I think God has a plan for us all, true.
    And sometimes it's not always the happiest of things but the bitterness of this piece tells me you have your mind set on what God has in store for us all.
    Great write!
    -Mandi


  • new born
    November 15, 2008

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    Fine with me

    This is kind of bitter... But I don't think it's true. Good job with this.
    xo