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Leadaches.



“Nothing stinks like a
pile of unpublished writing.”
Pink rejection slips reduced
to confetti in my shredder.

Yellowing pages
stacked haphazardly
in tall towers
of my dreams.

Words rush over
fields of white,
But all that I
hold dear is
shot down by
predator editors.
in short bullet-tin's,
going postal on me.

My muse zig-zags
here and there
with a target on his back,
Yet occasionally he comes
through unscathed.

Some tidbit of my
tedious tribulations
reaches the public eye.

Then it's back
to the leadaches,
My grains of thought
returned with the sharp
pains of disbelief.



 

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“Nothing stinks like a pile of unpublished writing.” ...

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  • Exit-Stage-Right
    December 1, 2008

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    Congrats on placing in the Sylvia contest with Leadaches. I just bought the '09 edition of Poet's Market... now let's see if I can get at least enough back to pay for the book!


  • george the 23rd
    December 1, 2008

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    I really enjoy the clever wordplay in this write. Stuff like -
    "all that I
    hold dear is
    shot down by
    predator editors.
    in short bullet-tin's,
    going postal on me."

    gave me a smile. You have captured here
    the reasons why I've always been hesitant about submitting any of my work for potential publication.


  • PrettyRagDoll
    December 1, 2008
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    Congrats with third!


  • PrettyRagDoll
    November 30, 2008

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    Do the pictures at the top hint at a personal experience with "unpublished writing"? Either way, your words portrayed a very honest feeling. I liked your metaphors relating to guns: targets, bullets, etc. It is so easy to form the cliche metaphors with guns, but you did it creatively, example: bullet-tins. Thanks for sharing!
    -Jenny


  • righteousme
    November 24, 2008

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    My muse zig-zags
    here and there
    with a target on his back,
    Yet occasionally he comes
    through unscathed. ...

    and when that happens you long for a gun of your own ... love where you took this quote ... thank you so much for your time and talent in this contest ...


  • georgie
    November 15, 2008

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    there is no accounting for taste when it comes to publishers... my husband is always trying to con me into puttng my best in a book ... im like... they r crap!!! geez read some of the other ppl on here. i write my poetry to get emotion out, for fun and for other people... publishing means nothing to me. publishers are exactly that... publishers not poetry critics. you and your writing are muchly loved on here,
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx


  • requiempoet gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    bwahahha you're so talented. The things you can do with a simple prompt. Very enjoyable as usual my dear Artis!

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