It's unfair,
But you don't seem to care
When I'm down
I'm not with you,like I'm used to
And you're not around
Everything around me makes me miss you
Nothing else can help the way I feel about you
So I'll start singing the beautiful blues
Just hearing your name, makes me sigh
What I once loved, made me so high
But now it's just so...
I just don't know...
I can't let go...
So I'll start singing the beautiful blues
Author notes
I'm not quite sure about this one. I like it myself...
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Comments
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I think everyone has to go through this at one point in their lives. Well written. I love how it rhymes so freely.
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had this with my ex... Missed him and wanted him but my sadness meant nothing to him.
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