Joints pop-
marrowed profanity
either;
meaningful
or meaning business
dirty socks
and thoughts
pile up;
molding corners
bend and wail-
whisper gently
while you sleep;
Wake
the
fuck up.
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- fuck you by sheltered.
900 points, ended November 26, 2008, 8 entries
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Wake
the
fuck up.
hell yeah -
hilarious and awesome ending.
this is really just a perfect little poem.
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sweet deal i like this
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i like this. :]
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True, true.
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i truly appreciate this
seems like the kind of thoughts you might have while drifting into awake
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i love it.
exactly how i feel todayyyy.
ily
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